The writer might have a point,but how he had put it is rather too strong a language characterised by plenty English errors.He seems to be moved by too much anger,emotions.His points are not well coordinated.He prides in offending others by coming out so insulting.He is too judgemental.Whoever you are,try some good research,be specific,professional and objective in your articles as you have been advised.
For ba Tumfweko,please scrutinise these articles before they go in public domain.If this article went your quality check and was allowed to be publicised,then your quality check dept needs serious education on journalism ethics.
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